You are truly a poet! I am so inspired by your messages and I really get it.
“Tired from round 1,when will the bell ring” That is a great line,I
could so relate to.
I was born on the same day,year and neighborhood as Mike Tyson May
8,1966 in East NY and also Sugar Ray Leonard
is born on my BD,so I can relate to fighters in a metaphorical way.
I love all your quotes especially “Everyday is a makeup exam” So true!
Also I love “360 degrees of Purification”,Blessings,untitled !!!
I really related to the way you write.I could understand how you must
feel free.I really didn’t see any errors as everything sounded
smooth and I could visualize your details and the analogy of the
message you were trying to convey.It would be wonderful if you could
record yourself reading your work on a CD also.
I am blown away!!!
I have to read it more to really catch some things I didn’t see before.
Someone recently told me the mind is only good for one thing -to learn
and write of course!
Keep on writing.